Hawk Roosting
by Ted Hughes
The hawk, a bird of prey, is seen in
Ted Hughes'
poem “Hawk Roosting” resting on a branch of a tree. The poem is
written in the first person as though the hawk is speaking, so it is
a dramatic monologue. The hawk seems to see himself as the centre of
the universe and creates an impression of arrogance, as though the
world were made for him and his purposes.
In the first stanza Hughes introduces
the hawk “in the top of the wood.” This high position is an
indication of superiority. The bird is very still and its eyes are
closed. Hughes uses alliteration of the “k” sound several times
in the poem, creating a harsh feeling. The sound exists in the word
“hawk” itself, of course, and there are further instances of it
in line 3 where “hooked” is repeated. In the fourth line “kills”
continues the alliteration. This line describes the hawk imagining
killing and eating its prey even while it is asleep. A picture of
ruthlessness begins to build up. Interestingly, lines 3 and 4 are the
only lines in the poem that rhyme.
The second stanza opens with the
exclamation “The convenience of the high trees!” The hawk again
refers to its high altitude, and the word “convenience” conveys
the idea that its position is an ideal one. The bird can look down on
the world below, and the impression is that the wood has been created
to suit its needs. Hughes links lines 6 and 7 with enjambment to
extend the idea that the hawk can fly with ease and make use of the
light from the sun. They are “of advantage to me,” once again
emphasising the fact that the hawk considers nature to have been
created for its own purposes.
The second stanza closes with the
hawk's comment that, from the top of the tree, it can see “the
earth's face” looking up and easily observe the details. Everything
is just right for this bird of prey.
In the opening line of the third
stanza, Hughes again uses alliteration with the hard “k” sound in
“locked” and “bark.” The hawk has a tight hold upon the
branch, whose surface is “rough.” Hughes uses enjambment once
more to link lines 10 and 11, describing how features of the hawk's
body were created. The word “Creation” is capitalised, thus
making it synonymous with God. The fact that the hawk considers that
it took “the whole of Creation” to make its feet and feathers
gives the bird an arrogant air. In the final line of this stanza, the
hawk sees that positions are now reversed; it holds Creation in one
small foot, therefore having become all powerful.
The end of the third stanza and the
beginning of the fourth are linked by enjambment, as the hawk shows
that it is free to “fly up” and circle the world below at its
leisure. Line 14 is an extremely telling one: “I kill where I
please because it is all mine.” The hawk considers that it has
supreme power and owns the whole earth that it can see below. Its
ruthlessness is apparent again in lines 15 and 16, as the hawk says
it possesses no “sophistry” or subtle reasoning; it kills by
“tearing off heads.” There is no attempt to soften the blow of
its hunting methods.
The fifth stanza continues the image of
the hawk hunting with the brief phrase “The allotment of death.”
The hawk chooses what it kills, and it is brutal. Enjambment again
links lines 18 and 19, describing how the hawk's passage takes it
“Through the bones of the living.” The stanza closes with the
statement “No arguments assert my right,” giving the impression
that the hawk's methods of killing are unquestionable. It does not
need to justify its actions.
The four lines of the sixth and final
stanza are all end stopped, and read as concise, matter-of-fact
sentences. They emphasise the idea that what the hawk says goes and
cannot be contested. The hawk states “Nothing has changed,” but
this is no accident. The bird considers, in the penultimate line of
the poem, that it has not allowed anything to change. The poem closes
with the line “I am going to keep things like that,” asserting
the hawk's power over the whole of nature.
Hughes appears to be using the hawk in
this poem as a symbol for power. A hawk would of course act
instinctively and kill for the purposes of survival. The implications
of “Hawk Roosting” are therefore that the poem is an extended
metaphor for the behaviour of a tyrant or power-seeking ruler. Such a
person would, as the hawk is in this poem, be self-centred and
arrogant. An authoritarian despot would not allow himself or his
methods to be questioned, and would see the world around him as being
designed to suit his purposes. Ted Hughes, in “Hawk Roosting,”
paints a picture of a creature that is ruthless and self-involved,
showing how a lust for power can take over a being and end in
brutality.
Here is the text of the poem:
I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes
closed.
Inaction, no falsifying dream
Between my hooked head and my hooked
feet:
Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and
eat.
The convenience of the high trees!
The air's buoyancy and the sun's ray
Are of advantage to me;
And the earth's face upward for my
inspection.
My feet are locked upon the rough bark.
It took the whole of Creation
To produce my foot, my each feather:
Now I hold Creation in my foot
Or fly up, and revolve it all slowly -
I kill where I please because it is all
mine.
There is no sophistry in my body:
My manners are tearing off heads -
The allotment of death.
For the one path of my flight is direct
Through the bones of the living.
No arguments assert my right:
The sun is behind me.
Nothing has changed since I began.
My eye has permitted no change.
I am going to keep things like that.
Originally published on helium.com
Originally published on helium.com
hello there wonderful piece of work I am actually working on this poem and I like to ask how would you describe the atmosphere?
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